A quick story showing the power of website conversion

This is excerpted from Do the Web Write (which I wrote), and shows the awesome power of website conversion. Truthfully, raising your website conversion rate even one to two percentage points can be huge for your business.

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A client once came to me and wanted me to help him write a few Google Adword ads – he wanted to bring more traffic to his site and increase business (he sold financial products). A quick chat about his site revealed that he already had exceptional traffic – he was getting close to 1,000 visits a day from interested prospects (he advertised heavily on Google.)

He was getting perhaps 10 inquiries a day, meaning he was converting at 1%. His goal was to get 20 inquiries a day, so he figured that if he increased his advertising enough to bring in 2,000 interested prospects, he’d reach that goal.

I looked over his site and recognized right away that I could help him by not increasing advertising, but by increasing conversion – his site was not very well-written, nor was it user friendly. So I told him “why not try and get more out of the traffic you already have?” We talked, and he agreed with my assessment and hired me.

I wrote up a quick plan for what to do: the first step was to change the page order a little, and get the most important information clicked on first. The second was to change the copy. Under my direction, he had his web designer do the first part, and then I rewrote perhaps 4 pages of copy. Then he put up the new site and waited.

He didn’t have to wait long – from the very first day, with the same amount of traffic he always had, he started getting 30+ inquiries. This kept up consistently for weeks, and then months. All told, his new conversion rate jumped to 3.5% – I more than tripled his business.

But here’s the really neat part – had he upped his advertising to raise business, he’d be paying increased advertising fees month after month after month.  But because I instead used the traffic he currently had, he instead had a ZERO increase in advertising.

Now, some of you may be saying “That’s great, Dan, but he had to pay YOU”. And yes, this is true. But my total fee was less than one month of increased advertising. So after the first month, that part becomes irrelevant. But it gets better – based on how much he makes from a sale, I actually paid for myself in one week. After that, it was pure gravy.

And here’s ONE MORE “even neater” part: This new conversion rate (3.5%) will almost certainly hold true even if he DOES decide to eventually increase advertising (as he obviously was willing to do before I changed things.) So he could feasibly be getting 3.5% on 2,000 visits if he so chose. ANOTHER doubling of business.

Nice little story, huh? And trust me, things like this happen all the time. Conversion is that powerful.

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Envision your life…

I want to get all “Zen” on you for a moment and talk about the power of vision. Or perhaps I should say “ENvision”.

It’s a very powerful thing – if you can envision something, I mean REALLY envision it, well, that’s the first step to making it happen.

Now I’m not going to get outrageous here – envision as I might, I’m not becoming the starting center fielder for the NY Yankees. But as I sit here, looking at my books for sale on Amazon.com, and looking around my office and how my life turned out, I’m struck by something profound…

I kinda planned this.

Thirteen years ago, I had just gotten divorced, and was making $10 per hour working a tech support job. I was 32. It seemed like life was going nowhere. I had been in business for myself a few times before then, but never really went anywhere. I think that’s because partially, I didn’t know where I was going.

So, at 32, I started thinking about where I really wanted to be.  I didn’t set any “official” goals. No five year plan or anything like that (that’s WAY too “type A” for me.) But I envisioned what I wanted out of life. And here’s what I wanted:

  • A loving wife and a great marriage
  • A nice little house – nothing fancy, mind you, but a place I really enjoyed living in
  • To work for myself, as a writer.
  • From a basement office.
  • I even had the office decorated in my mind. I’m not kidding – I’d have a nice desk, a nice TV, surrounded by my favorite movies, horror film memorabilia on the wall, Owls everywhere…
  • I’d have a black pickup truck in the driveway. Seriously, I even had the color picked out.
  • And yes, writing a few books was part of this dream, too.
  • A hot tub would be nice too.

I was dead serious about what I wanted - I actually envisioned myself living this life.

And you know what? It’s all there now. Even the black pickup and the Hot Tub.

Now I have to make a new list… a third / fourth book (not on just business, either – I’d like to also write about life motivation, relationships, living a happy life, etc.) I’d also like to be on the radio some, maybe do some seminars. More consulting for sure, because I’m good at writing and web conversion and such – and I can teach it, too. Lots of things, really.

The point is, I don’t just dream this stuff. I actually envision it.

Then I do the next step (which is vital.) I ask myself the all-important question – “Ok Dan, how do we go about making this happen?”

Like I said before, I set no timetables, no “goals”, none of that. I just envision what I want, and begin the process of making it happen.

Do you think it was an accident that I started my writing business? Was it dumb luck that made me send a proposal to a publisher (truth be told, hundreds of thousands of writers have millions of rejections – I have like four. Once I decided to write the book, I simply made it happen and sold it.)

I don’t say the above to brag or impress you in any way. I say it because millions of people dream. They dream, but they don’t ENVISION. And even if they do, they certainly don’t say “ok, how do we make this happen.”

I’m telling you to do just that. Envision what you want. Then really go about making it happen.

So how do we go about making it happen? We’ll talk about that another time :)

How to watch a movie

I’m not all business here – today I’m going to teach you how to watch a movie (this is a post from my old blog updated for 2012 – I do that every so often when I have an old thought I want to revive.)

Anyway, I’m a big movie buff / borderline film snob, and I got a few classic films for Xmas (including the Giorgio Morodor version of Fritz Lang’s Metropolis.) I immersed myself in that one last night, and it was awesome. But I view movies a little different than your average Joe, so I wanted to post a little something about the art of watching a movie for those that are interested.

Now, it may seem odd that I post this, because “watching a movie” takes no more effort than, say, “looking out the window”. In fact, depending on if the sun is in your eyes or not, the movie might be infinitely easier.

But to me, there’s a profound difference between watching a movie, and watching a movie.

Most people simply watch movies. But a few watch movies. Here’s the difference (besides the overly clever use of italics):

  • You can watch a movie over a few sittings. Just pause the DVD and come back later.
  • You watch a movie in one sitting. Straight through.
  • You can watch a movie with interruptions. Kids, phone, dinner, etc.
  • You watch a movie with no interruptions. Go away.
  • You can watch a movie with friends – you goof, yell at the screen, comment, etc.
  • Watching a movie with friends is hard, unless they are watching it also.

You probably get the point. In other words, when you watch a movie, you actually carve out time to really watch it. And you allow yourself to get absorbed in it. You understand the characters, what’s going on, etc – the movie gets your full attention.

Now, whether I watch a film or simply watch one depends on the film. I merely watch “Transformers 2″. But I watch “The Seventh Seal.” To me, it’s really the only way you can truly enjoy such a film.

I’ve been told by people “I wish I could get into movies like you do”.

Well, it’s easy – just watch them.

Don Lapre, Honesty in Business, and other New Year’s Thoughts

Usually when a year ends, some website or TV show will do a short  retrospective of famous people who died during the year. For me, the October passing of TV Pitchman extraordinaire Don Lapre was noteworthy, because Don was/is somewhat responsible for  my own entrepreneurial business philosophy, both in good and bad ways.

Don LapreIf you don’t know who Don Lapre is, well, here’s his picture – I’m sure you recognize him from late 80′s / early 90′s infomercials.

You see, I first felt my entrepreneurial stirrings watching those infomercials. I LOVED them, especially the make money ones. Don Lapre, Dave DelDotto, Brad Richdale, Tom Wu, the fat guy with the Hawaiian shirt and the wheelbarrow full of money, Carlton Sheets, Tony Robbins (technically not a “make money guy”, but I liked him anyway);  the list goes on. I didn’t actually believe that buying the programs was going to make anyone money, but the very principal of what many of them were doing “spoke” to me.  Especially Don’s – Don was the best of the bunch. It was just so logical – if you get one newspaper ad that makes money, duplicate it in 500 other papers… OMG - *head explode*. Basically, it made me think outside the box… you could see that in my business now, where I happily spend money advertising my services all over the world. Most people don’t think that big.

But there was something also dishonest about these guys, and especially Don. You see, Don had these “three different ways to make money” (tiny ads, buying and selling, and 900 numbers) and essentially said he applied them himself, dragging himself out of poverty and a one-bedroom apartment… however, Don failed to mention that some of us saw him on TV a few years earlier, pushing a “people who are owed money” list. He said in THAT infomercial that he used to be poor until he did the list thing… so which was it?  How come the infomercials that made him famous failed to mention the business venture he was in a few years earlier? I knew then that despite his exuberance (which I loved), he was dishonest.

Don also (like many of the others) never actually mentioned a product to sell. They talked about selling, but never told anyone what to sell. The truth is, these guys were essentially selling a dream, and that’s what got most of them into trouble. Don’s record with the FTC/etc is abysmal, and he eventually stopped selling the making money package. But then he popped up a few years later with “The Greatest Vitamin in the World”… however, the infomercial was obviously “cheap”, and Don didn’t look so hot. That brash, bright-eyed 20-something that I found so inspiring was now a beaten down 40-something huckster. It was sad.  More FTC stuff, more fraud claims, and this past October, suicide in a jail cell. A  whimper of an end to one of marketing’s biggest stars.

It didn’t have to end that way. His businesses didn’t have to die. He didn’t have to age 30 years in a decade. He didn’t have to cut himself so he bled to death in a jail cell at 47 years old.

How could it have been different? He could have simply been honest. He could have used his charisma and obvious sales talent to make a living that didn’t defraud people or require showing “results not typical” in small letters on his commercials every five minutes. As much as I liked Don, I have to admit that the loudest guy in the room is usually the one who’s full of shit. And Don was loud. And like I said above, even though I liked the guy’s way of “thinking big”, I also knew he was full of shit. And nothing good ever comes from that. Dishonest people may shine bright for awhile, but rarely do they survive long-term. Don didn’t. Neither did Bernie Madoff (or his son, who also killed himself.)

That’s another lesson I learned from Don - How not to be. You can look long and hard, but you likely won’t find a more honest guy than me. And I’m proud of that. Here’s an example – Don probably never met a customer he wouldn’t sell to.  Conversely, I routinely turn down copywriting work from people who I know I can’t help. I’ve seen people with horrid websites and a terrible business model who think copywriting is the answer. Sometimes it is, but sometimes it isn’t, and if I feel it isn’t, I don’t want your money, even if you really want to hire me. It’s just how I do things. I do what I say I’ll do, when I said I would do it. And I do things that I think are right, all the time. Everybody should be that way.  It almost puzzles me when people aren’t.

As I write, it’s almost 2012, and that always excites me. I’m not one for artificial milestones, but New Year’s really does feel “fresh”. I don’t really have any resolutions or whatnot, nor do I set any goals. I have a general idea of how I’d like things to go, and that’s usually enough for me. I’m looking to expand the consulting side of things this year – what that actually means I’ll figure out in time – it could be simply launching a new website review service (coming soon), and it could mean bigger things. But that’s my overall plan – keep copywriting for anyone who wants it, and get paid a little more for my opinion. Because my opinion is worth a lot!

Have a great “between Xmas and New Year’s” week, everyone.

Copywriting 101 – How long does Copywriting take?

I always have a lot of people e-mailing me about copywriting: “I want to be a copywriter, how do I do it?”… “I’m starting a copywriting business – do you have any advice?”… How much do I charge for copywriting?

Etc etc.

So I figured it might be useful to post some thoughts on copywriting, how I do it, what to expect, and so on. I’ll start today with how long something takes to “copywrite”.

To begin, there really is no hard and fast rule. I have written a 900 word article in an hour, and I’ve taken three hours to write one half as long. I’ve taken a full day to write one webpage, and other days, I’ve banged out a six page website. It all generally depends on the topic / industry, and the intent of the writing.

I mention “intent”, and it’s something that’s very important.   The intent of the writing matters a LOT.

What I mean by intent is “what do we want a reader to do / think?” If we want the reader to contact / buy, well, that’s infinitely harder than just “well, we just want some articles for SEO”.  But it goes even deeper than the piece itself. For example, take a five page website for an accounting firm – every page has to at least give the reader the feeling of “yes, these folks are the ones to contact”. It very different than just throwaway articles for SEO.

This is why there is such disparity in copywriting prices. “”Cheap copywriting” firms from India and the like bang out mindless SEO articles or pages of web copy for $15 each, because they literally take a few minutes to cut and paste together (don’t think they do it any other way.) But to write one that gets 100 comments on the Huffington Post (or converts at 5%)? That might take a few hours (hint: those are the kind I do.)

Everyone is different, but here are my “general” times for pieces:

Web Copy – Assuming “normal” sized pages (300-500 words), I can count on a page of good web copy taking anywhere from an hour to four hours. Each. I realize that’s a big gap, but it’s accurate. Just the other day I spent 4 hours writing a 400-word landing page.

Letters – Depending on the topic, a one-page letter will take me anywhere from one to three hours. Letters are usually (but not always) a little easier than web copy as the intent  / audience tends to be more focused.

Articles – “Easy” articles on common topics can take an hour. Anything in depth will take longer (for example, I spend a half day each week ghostwriting a Huffington Post article for a somewhat famous client.)

The time taken to copywrite anything is something I cannot negotiate. I write like I write, and that’s that. To be honest, I think the times listed above are pretty common for most professional copywriters. I’ve been doing this for a decade, and I don’t see anyone writing a results-getting webpage in a half an hour. Even if you are just starting out, the times listed above aren’t going to change too much.

Now, this does not mean you are tapping keys for four hours. The other day, when I was writing that 400 word / 4 hour landing page, I took a walk for a half an hour to mull over an idea or two. I realize nobody wants to pay me to take a walk, but that’s what’s involved (and it’s why I don’t bill by the hour – more on that in another post.) Writing professionally is hard, time-consuming work – don’t let anyone tell you otherwise. Writing actually hurts.

Anyway, I hope the above is useful to anyone wondering about copywriting and how long something takes. Enjoy the rest of your Sunday.

 

 

 

I’m all business… sort of

Tell me you’re not grinning… (I can’t get this stupid blogger to embed the video… just click it – you won’t be sorry. Very safe for work.)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yon2YuXssvo

 

 

A Thanksgiving Post about King Kong

This post will be a Thanksgiving tradition. You’ll see it every year here. Lots of businesses give nice heartfelt messages on Thanksgiving, and that’s good. But instead of repeating what others have said, here’s something fun I remember about Thanksgiving.

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It’s the Holiday season (Thanksgiving, to be exact), and that means the 1930’s version of King Kong is probably on TV numerous times.

When I was a kid, this movie was on every Thanksgiving on NY Channel 9. And being a “monster movie” fan, I watched every year. And besides the annual Thanksgiving showing, they also seem to play Kong lot between Thanksgiving and X-Mas – hence this post, as it got me thinking about it.

Truth be told, I love this movie (the 2005 remake was decent, but too long – the original is a better experience… the 1977 remake never happened. Don’t bring it up again.) However, even though I love it, King Kong probably has the biggest plot holes of any movie I have ever seen.

KONG SIZED plot holes.

To wit, here are a few questions I have (these also appeared on my old site years back):

·     The voyage to Skull Island took over a month. So the voyage back (with Kong) would have taken a month. What did they feed Kong that month? And whose job was it to clean up after him?

 

·     The “big show” in NY was… what, exactly? Kong chained to the wall? That’s it? That was going to be the big show? Talk about underwhelming. Good thing he escaped – now THAT was a show. In fact, one could say it’s almost like they planned Kong’s escape (heyyyyy…. )

 

·     What did Kong do with the other women who were sacrificed to him? He kept Ann Darrow around – where were the others? I always envisioned he had a harem back at his cave… (for what it’s worth, I’d keep Fay Wray around too)

 

·     Kong climbed the Empire State Building. The friggen EMPIRE STATE BUILDING!! But he couldn’t scale that puny 50 wall the natives built?? Really??

 

·     Which leads us to my biggest issue – the natives built a 50 wall to keep Kong and the other giant monsters out. Truth be told, that’s probably a smart thing to do when you live on an island full of giant monsters. So tell me, why on earth did they equip this wall with a 50 door??? That makes NO SENSE AT ALL. You build a wall to keep Kong out, but you also put in a Kong-sized door?? WHY??? For what possible reason??? If the wall needed a door, why not a regular, native-sized door?    

   Oh... Hi Kong... didn't see you there. Come on in.

Oh, hi Kong… come on in.

Anyway, have a great Thanksgiving!!

The difference between a contractor and an employee

Contractor vs. employee… which is which?

This is something that I’ve been thinking about, because I’ve been on both sides of the contractor equation. Years ago, every now and again I was hired as a contractor copywriter by companies, and I’ve hired contract copywriters from time to time to help with overflow (sadly, there hasn’t been much overflow the last year.)

Anyway, there’s always a lot of confusion with this. I admit, earlier, I didn’t know the rules either. It wasn’t until an audit by New York State that I knew the rules. So to help out, here’s the criteria, in general terms, of what separates a contractor from an employee:

1) Contractors set the pay rate.
2) Contractors set the timeframe.
3) Contractors do the job the way they wish to do it.
4) Contractors set the days and hours they work.

This is interesting in the copywriting business (and other “creative” type online/computer businesses), because, in general terms, companies that troll Craigslist (etc) looking for freelancers usually have a (low) rate of pay and fairly strict deadlines. Now I do understand that sometimes deadlines must be set – I’ve told people “I really need this in a week – is that do-able?” But in the end, it has to be the contractor’s call. And I’ve learned to let people who do work for me set the rate, too.

The above is usually an unwelcome surprise to many entrepreneurs / small companies, because they want the best of both worlds – the control of an employee, and the ease of working with a contractor (no taxes/workman’s comp/etc). I admit – that seems attractive to someone just starting out. Hire a person as an “independent contractor”, yet treat them like an employee. But you can’t have it both ways. You can’t hire a contractor, and then insist they come in 5 days a week, 9-5. If you want to do that, then what you have is an employee. Here’s the IRS page on the subject

The easiest way to think about this is hiring a contractor for your home – you hire them, but they set the pay, and they come when they wish. And if it rains, oh well, they may not show.

Or, look at it this way – you hire a contractor to do a specific (often one-time) job, and you hire an employee to fill a position.

Hope this helps someone, and keeps them from making a mistake. You can get burned really bad if you do this wrong.

My Thoughts on Occupy Wall Street

I’m sure most of you are dying to know my thoughts on the Occupy Wall Street protests that don’t seem to be going away. I have to be honest in saying that my own thoughts are somewhat unclear on the matter. However, there are a few things I want to be clear about right up front: Read the rest of this entry »

Money never sleeps

“Money never sleeps” is an old saying – it essentially means that money is made around the clock. And while I’m not a huge fan of a “business 24/7″ mentality, there is a definite truth to the thought, especially for businesses like mine (copywriting / website writing / etc), and similar (web design, marketing, graphic design, consulting, etc). Let me explain: Read the rest of this entry »